In my excert from the book , eight teenagers had just been volunteering to fix up a old church in a bad neighborhood. When an arson set the church on fire, the eight teens were trapped in the church while it was burning down. They were trying to escape throught the back bulkhead doors, but they were chained shut from the out side. The protagonist , Macey, has just had her long brown hair burnt off durring the fire, but she was saved by her crush, Austin. I couldn't imagine what that must feel like! I used to have hair down to my butt before I cut it, and to imagine it being on fire then not there. .Whoa!
"'. . .If we're sure that everyone is just shaken up and not hurt, I'm going to
send you on home' [Reverend Warren] said to Grace, 'You are right. Chaining the
bulkhead doors was stupid.But somebody broke in a few months ago when we had the
children here, and he stabbed a nine-year-old. The property committee was more
scared of who could break in than they were of fire.' Macey
forgot her hair. What was hair? A
nine-year-old stabbed in a Sunday school room.An arsonist who had hit two other
churches and a temple. Hell itself breathes out Contagion to this
world. Venita walked Macey a few feet away from the
others.'Don't cry,' she said.'Your hair will grow back.' Venita tilted her head
and gave Macey a mischievous grin.'And one nice
thing.' 'Oh, sure,' said Macey. 'Texas
is real proud of saving you,' said Venita. 'He's your man,
whether him and you want it or not.'
I like this excert because she realizes that her hair is nothing compaired to a 9 year old being stabbed to death in Sunday school.I also like how they quote Shakespeare's Hamelet. I think Caroline B. Cooney wants the reader to put themselves in Macey's shoes and see how small some problems in our lifes are.
Cooney,Caroline. Burning Up.New York:Bantam Doubleday Dell Publishing Group Inc., 1999
It's really interesting how quickly her thoughts shift from her hair to another's suffering. This is a use of free indirect style -- we see right into her thoughts.
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